Exhibo Editorial
How to Describe Your Own Work
Tombstone facts, wall-length captions and sales copy for single paintings and objects, without rewriting your artist statement
Describe one work by stating the facts a stranger needs before any interpretation: title, date, medium, support and size, then one or two sentences about what the viewer can see or how the piece was made. Museum staff call the factual block a tombstone. The Art Institute of Chicago packs maker, title, date, materials and ownership into that block so a visitor can answer who, what, when and what it is made of without reading a chat. The Victoria and Albert Museum keeps many standard object captions at about 50 to 60 words because visitors stand, tire and came to look. Getty interpretive guidance asks writers to begin with concrete visual details, limit a label to one to three ideas, and avoid unsupported praise such as “the finest of its type.” Your job for a painting or object is the same scale: identify the thing, orient the eye, stop before you rewrite your whole practice.
This guide sits in the artist career guide. It covers why single-work text fails when you paste a statement into a caption field, how to build a reusable tombstone, methods for wall text, website copy and sales notes, a materials-and-context table, edge cases (untitled, editions, “mixed media,” time-based work), what museum and gallery editors do, published cost bands for short editorial help, and when to stop polishing. Career-level prose about what you make across a body of work belongs in how to write an artist statement. A third-person publicity biography is a separate document in this series. For how public collections present objects at institutional standard, browse museums.
Why Single-Work Descriptions Carry More Weight Than You Think
Juries, dealers, collectors and wall visitors meet one object at a time. They open a PDF, a shop listing or a gallery label and ask the questions A. Robin Hoffman lists for Art Institute visitors: how old is it, who made it, what is it made of. Price curiosity belongs elsewhere. If the caption cannot answer the first three, the reader invents answers from the thumbnail, and those guesses often wrong-foot the sale or the selection.
Applications and open calls still lean on portfolio captions even when a separate statement exists. College Art Association digital-format guidance for artists tells you to supply, for each work, name, italicised title, media, completion date and dimensions in a fixed order. That block is the currency of professional submission. A poetic paragraph that omits height and medium forces a registrar or a juror to email you. A sales page that lists “large oil” without centimetres forces a buyer to abandon the enquiry. Wall text that repeats your statement wastes the visitor’s standing time and competes with the curator’s voice.
Description also protects the object over time. Conservators, insurers and future you reopen the record when varnish yellows, when a buyer asks what sits under the paint, or when a gallery needs a loan form. Vague “mixed media on canvas” ages badly. Specific “oil and cold wax on linen, 120 × 90 cm, 2024” still identifies the work after the file name has been lost. You write the caption once with care so every later use is a cut, not a reconstruction from memory.
The common failure is genre confusion. Artists paste a 200-word artist statement under every image, or write a biography of the year they made the piece. Museum educators separate tombstone from chat for a reason. The chat, when it exists, should push the viewer back to the surface: colour, scale, process, one idea. Getty’s adult audience guide states that primacy of the art comes first, and that object labels should help visitors look more carefully. Your own captions succeed by the same test. A stranger facing the image can name what they hold or hang after reading your words.
Start With the Tombstone, Not the Story
Build a master data line for every finished work before you write any sentence of interpretation. Treat that line as a controlled field set you copy into spreadsheets, website CMS fields, invoice templates and label Word files. Inventing a new medium string each time you upload a JPEG is how “acrylic on canvas” becomes “mixed media” six months later on a different platform.
Order and punctuation matter because registrars and jurors scan for pattern. CAA’s conventions for documenting works list height × width for two-dimensional pieces and height × width × depth for three-dimensional ones, with units kept consistent inside one string. Outside the United States, metric is the default; many UK and European listings lead with centimetres and add inches in parentheses for international buyers. Do not mix “72 inches × 2 feet” in one line. Measure the support or the outer extent of the work as made, not the frame, unless the frame is integral to the piece. Note framed size separately when a buyer or shipper needs it.
Medium language should read like an ingredients list. The Art Institute’s label explainer tells visitors that materials appear in descending order of prominence. Lead with the dominant paint or material, then support: “oil on linen,” “watercolour and graphite on paper,” “bronze.” Avoid empty “mixed media” when you can name the main constituents in a short string. If the list grows long, keep the tombstone to the primary materials and move secondary additives into the chat (“with powdered marble dust in the ground”). Date the completion year; use a range or “circa” only when you truly lack a finish date. Italicise or otherwise mark the title as the brief requires. If the work is untitled, write Untitled and add a bracketed descriptor or year so files remain searchable: Untitled (Blue Interior), 2023.
Fields every master record should hold
Keep one row per artwork in a spreadsheet or database. Minimum columns: inventory or studio number; title; year; medium string; support; height; width; depth if needed; units; framed height/width/depth if relevant; signature location and transcription; edition number if applicable; status (available, reserved, sold, NFS); storage or location note. Optional columns that save later pain: series name; weight for shipping; hanging hardware included (yes/no); varnish or finish; photographic filename of the master documentation shot.
Fill the row the day you declare the work finished. Photograph the back for inscriptions before you wrap the piece. Transcribe the signature exactly as it appears. When you later write wall copy or a shop blurb, you pull from this row instead of guessing. The interpretive sentences change by audience; the tombstone should not drift.
Title, date and orientation traps
Titles are part of the work. Inventing a new public title for every platform confuses search and provenance. If a gallery asks for a working title during install, record the final title in your master the same day the wall label goes up. Abstract works still need a stable name even when the title is Untitled plus a number from a series. Orientation belongs in plain language when the image file could be read either way: “portrait orientation” or “hang with the signed edge at lower right.” Square works still list height then width as equal numbers so the convention stays intact.
For prints and multiples, the tombstone expands: medium, paper, plate or image size if different from sheet size, edition size, impression number, publisher if any, and state if relevant. Signing and numbering practice for editions sits in a sibling article in this series; here you only need the fields that identify this impression in a caption. For unique paintings, “1/1” is theatre. Leave edition language off unique works.
How to Draft: Look First, Then Explain
Weak captions begin with intention and never reach the object. Strong captions reverse that order. Getty object-label advice begins with specifics that encourage close looking, then moves to process or context when relevant. The V&A’s gallery-text guide asks writers to engage with the object, explain what might puzzle a visitor, and keep the first sentence short (under about sixteen words where possible). Smithsonian interpretive guidance pushes short, active sentences, often fifteen to twenty words, because visitors read on their feet while companions pull them onward.
Sit with the work or a large documentation photograph. Write five factual observations without metaphors: dominant colours, scale relative to a body, surface (matte, glossy, scraped), subject or motif if any, one process clue visible in the surface. Circle the two observations a non-specialist would miss from a phone thumbnail. Those become the spine of your chat. Only then add one sentence of why those choices matter for this piece. Leave career narrative, theory citations and sales adjectives for other documents.
Read the draft aloud while looking at the image. If a sentence could describe three other works in your studio, cut it. If you praise the painting (“powerful,” “unique,” “important”), cut the praise; Getty and Art Institute of Chicago interpretation staff both treat unsupported qualitative judgement as a label fault. If you explain your entire practice, move that language to the statement guide and keep one idea here. The Freer Gallery of Art’s post-reinstallation labels, discussed in the Smithsonian’s interpretive writing guide, often run 75 to 100 words and open with a headline that prepares the reader; you can borrow the headline habit for website product titles without stuffing SEO spam into a wall caption.
A reusable three-layer draft
Layer one is the tombstone line, unchanged across contexts. Layer two is a 40 to 70 word looking caption: what is visible, how it was made if that is not obvious, one concrete detail. Layer three is optional context of 30 to 80 words for sales pages or catalogue notes: series position, hanging notes, inspiration stated without autobiography. You assemble layers to match the brief. A museum-style wall may take only layers one and two. An online shop may take all three plus bullet specs. A jury form may take layer one only in a caption field and keep layer two for an optional “about this work” box.
Draft layer two in present tense about the object (“The surface holds long horizontal scrapes of cobalt over a warm ground”) and past tense about your actions if needed (“I built the ground in three thin layers”). Getty style notes that split. Avoid “my practice explores” openers; that sentence belongs to statements. Avoid telling the viewer what they will feel. State what the work does in material terms and let feeling remain the viewer’s job.
Edit for length, jargon and false poetry
Cut until one idea remains. Beverly Serrell’s widely cited museum label work, summarised in Smithsonian training materials, treats short standards as a way to increase what visitors absorb, not reduce it. V&A editors make the same claim: visitors came to look at objects, not to read books on the wall. Your website can host a longer note, yet the first screen of a listing still behaves like a label. Lead with the usable facts.
Define terms once if you must use them. “Impasto,” “sfumato” and “chiaroscuro” need a plain clause on first use for general readers. Foreign titles need a translation in parentheses on first mention, per Getty practice. Replace International Art English (“interrogates the space of…”) with nouns you can photograph. Replace synonym stacks (“quiet, intimate, contemplative”) with one accurate adjective or, better, a visible detail that implies the tone. Spell-check, then ask one non-art reader to paraphrase the piece after twenty seconds with the image. If they cannot, the caption failed the Getty looking test.
Match the Text to the Context
The same painting needs different word counts for a wall, a submission form, a personal website and a marketplace. Institutions set hard limits because design and visitor behaviour demand them. Getty object labels generally top out around 30 to 140 words depending on type and layout. V&A standard object captions sit near 50 to 60 words, with some exhibitions allowing 80 to 100 when the material requires it. Introductory panels run longer (V&A often 130 to 150; Getty introductory statements 50 to 200). Your artist statement for applications is a different genre and a different length band; do not paste it onto a plinth.
Decide the reader’s body position. Standing readers get short sentences and one idea. Sitting readers on a product page will tolerate a second paragraph if the first screen already answered size, medium and price-adjacent practicalities (framed or not, ready to hang). Jurors skimming a hundred images want the tombstone correct and a caption that matches the file. Curators writing institutional labels may rewrite your offered text into house voice; give them a clean short paragraph and accept the edit.
Wall labels, group shows and open studios
Offer a tombstone plus a 50 to 70 word third-person caption unless the organiser specifies first person. Keep your name off the chat if the tombstone already carries it. Point to something in the room: a colour shift at the left edge, a join in the support, a motif that recurs two works away. North Carolina Museum of Art education tips for label writing stress choosing what supports the exhibition’s message and capping informational labels near 120 words so visitors are not flooded. In a group show, your caption should not hijack the theme panel’s job. In an open studio, a short card that includes price (if you sell from the room) and contact method earns more goodwill than a manifesto.
Print proofs at the intended type size and read them from a metre away. Museum development guidance in the UK often places wall graphics in an optimum band around 750 to 1,600 mm from the floor and warns about glare on glossy stock. Matt print and high contrast help. You are not designing a museum show alone, yet the same physics apply to a DIY label on a white cube wall.
Websites, marketplaces and sales notes
Online, the tombstone still leads. Saatchi Art’s artist help on descriptions asks for simple English plus practical facts: surface texture, delicacy, framed or unframed, finished edges, hanging hardware, installation notes. Collectors also want a short story of choice: why this medium, what sparked the piece. Keep that story tied to the object. Do not open with childhood biography. Do not close with a demand that the buyer feel healed.
Structure a sales description as tombstone, looking paragraph, practical bullets. Bullets carry dimensions in cm and inches, framed status, shipping weight if known, and whether a certificate or invoice accompanies the work. Pricing method belongs in the series article on pricing; here you only need clarity about what the listed price includes (frame, VAT, packing). For international listings, dual units reduce abandoned carts. For commissions already sold, mark the page sold and keep the description as archive rather than deleting the record that future collectors use to understand your scale.
Materials, Size and Process Language: A Working Table
Use the table below as a production checklist when you write or revise captions. It is a studio tool, not a museum house style. Where a gallery, fair or platform states a format, that format wins.
| Context | Typical length beyond tombstone | Voice | Must include | Usually leave out | Common failure |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Tombstone / inventory line | 0 (facts only) | Neutral | Title, year, medium, H × W (× D), units | Interpretation, price | “Mixed media”; frame size as work size |
| Museum-style wall caption | ~50–60 words (V&A standard); up to ~100–140 (Getty band) | Often third person | One looking idea; process if invisible | Full statement; CV; superlatives | Pasted statement; jargon |
| Group-show / open-studio card | ~40–80 words + price if selling | Third or first as house rules | Tombstone; contact or QR if needed | Long series history | Competing with theme panel |
| Jury / open-call caption field | Follow form (often one line or ≤100 words) | As specified | Exact match to uploaded file | Sales pitch | Caption for a different work |
| Website work page | ~80–200 words + bullets | First or third | Dual-unit size; framed status; materials | Manifesto; unrelated bio | Specs buried below poetry |
| Marketplace / shop listing | ~100–250 words + bullets | Usually first person | Hanging notes; surface; shipping-relevant facts | Fake urgency; empty keywords | “Large art” without cm |
| Catalogue / loan note | Per editor (often 100–300) | House style | Credit line fields if required | Informal studio jokes | Missing accession-style IDs |
| Invoice / COA annex | Facts + condition note | Neutral | Medium, size, year, signature note | Marketing adjectives | Inconsistent with website |
Beside the table, keep a short banned list for your own drafts: “unique” as self-praise, “powerful,” “masterpiece,” “timeless,” “explores the intersection of,” and “mixed media” without a follow-up list. Keep an allowed precision list: named pigments or paint types present in the work, support brand only if it matters to conservation or buyer expectation, varnish type, and whether the work is glazed.
Process language earns its place when the photograph cannot show the fact. Layered glazes, stitching, embedded text, fugitive materials, and participatory instructions need words. Routine brushwork on cotton duck does not need theatrical verbs. State archival or non-archival materials honestly when a buyer will hang the work in daylight; do not invent museum-grade claims for student-grade paper.
Edge Cases: Untitled Works, Editions, Collaboration and Time
Default advice assumes a unique painting with a clear title and a rectangular support. Studios break that frame weekly. Handle the exception in the tombstone first so the chat does not have to apologise.
Untitled series need stable identifiers. Number within the year or series (Untitled 14, 2025, from Night Rooms). Add a short visual hook in brackets only when the number alone will collide in search. For works that change over time (kinetic elements, living materials, software that updates), date the version you are selling or exhibiting and describe the change condition in one sentence. For destroyed or ephemeral pieces documented only as photographs, CAA-aligned practice is to say so in the documentation rather than present a photo as the unique object.
Editions, certificates and shared authorship
Prints and multiples require edition fraction, medium of print, and paper. If impressions differ (hand-finishing, variable edition), say so in the caption so buyers do not expect clones. Point to your edition-signing habits in the sibling guide rather than repeating full COA law here. Collaborations need named co-authors in the tombstone line in the order you agreed. Do not bury a co-maker in a footnote while the sales page lists you alone. For works that incorporate assistants’ labour under your direction, follow the ethical and contractual norms of your field; the caption should not invent solitary genius when the contract names a studio.
Time-based, installation and “mixed media” bundles
Video and sound need duration (hours, minutes, seconds), edition if limited, and playback specifications the presenter must meet. Installations need overall footprint, number of components, and what the host must supply. CAA digital-format notes ask for physical dimensions and an outline of media for installations. Your caption should tell a technician whether the piece needs a dark room, a plinth, or daily watering.
“Mixed media” remains the most abused phrase in online listings. Replace it with a short descending list. If the platform’s medium dropdown forces a generic category, put the specific string in the description’s first sentence. Assemblage that includes found objects should note whether objects are fixed or replaceable, and whether organic materials were treated. Toxicity and handling notes belong in packing instructions and, when relevant, in a one-line safety note for installers; do not sensationalise.
Diptychs and multi-panel works list overall dimensions and panel count. State hanging interval if the gap is part of the work. For shaped or circular supports, add shape in words beside the measurements so a shipper does not assume a rectangle.
What Professionals Do With Object Text
Museum editors write for people who move. Smithsonian guidance cites Beverly Serrell’s observation that visitors often traverse hundreds of square feet per minute; a 2,000-square-foot exhibition may hold attention for only five to ten minutes in aggregate, shared with looking, talking and interactives. Labels therefore compete with fatigue. Professional writers set word counts before drafting, place the main idea early, and test whether the label asserts claims without visible evidence in the work. Art Institute of Chicago interpretation staff use checklists that ask whether a label packs more than one or two main ideas, leans on passive voice, or repeats biased viewpoints without historicising them. Their “Words that Work” lists flag vague praise (“innovative,” “interesting”) and insider nouns that block general readers.
Registrars and collection information staff care about consistency across databases, wall, web and loan paperwork. Philadelphia Museum of Art publishing guidance shows how credit lines, dimensions and medium strings must survive multiple formats (object-first captions, artist-first captions, web pages that omit credit lines in favour of links). As a living artist you may not write donor credit lines, yet the same discipline applies: one medium string, one size string, one title everywhere. When a gallery offers to rewrite your blurb, compare their version to your master tombstone and correct factual drift before you approve tone.
Commercial galleries often prefer short, confident captions that leave room for the salesperson’s conversation. Auction catalogue notes are a different genre with legal and scholarship burdens; do not imitate auction purple prose for a studio sale. Educators writing for schools may ask for curriculum hooks; supply a factual caption and let them add the pedagogy. In every case, professionals prefer a clean short text they can edit over a long text they must gut.
Gilda Williams’s How to Write About Contemporary Art remains a common recommendation among UK curators for cutting redundancy and matching tone to genre. Pair that handbook habit with institutional length discipline and you will sound closer to a wall label than to a press release.
What Short Editorial Help Costs
Most artists should write their own tombstones and first captions. Paid help is for editing density, fixing inconsistent specs across a whole shop, or access support when writing itself is the barrier. Scope the job as short editorial labour, not as a full grant package.
In the UK, Artists’ Union England rate guidance for freelance visual artists places preparation tasks (including writing and proofreading related to exhibitions) inside professional fee bands that start in the mid-£20s per hour for newer graduates and rise with experience, with day rates from the low £200s upward depending on band and year of guidance. A caption edit for ten works is often a few focused hours, not a full day, if your spreadsheet is already clean. Specialist artist-development mentors sometimes advertise written critique of a short text from roughly £40 upward and hourly mentoring from about £55; treat any single menu as an illustration and compare deliverables (annotated file versus rewrite).
In the US, university writing centres, peer swaps and campus career offices remain the low-cost first pass. Freelance editorial rates advertised for artists and grant writers in 2025–2026 industry blogs often sit around 50 to 150 dollars per hour; a batch of artwork descriptions should be quoted as a flat mini-project with a cap, not as open-ended coaching. Marketplace “AI refine” tools (some platforms now offer one-click rewrites) can smooth grammar after you supply a factual draft; they also flatten voice and invent claims. Keep final responsibility for accuracy. Arts Council England has reminded applicants in other contexts that they remain accountable for submitted text; the same ethic applies to sales copy that asserts archival materials or unique status.
Free routes still do most of the work: read V&A and Getty PDFs, swap captions with a peer, and test one label on a visitor to your studio who does not make art. Spend money when a shop migration has wrecked every medium string, when English-language access support is fundable, or when a catalogue deadline needs a professional copy-editor for house style.
When to Get Help, and When to Stop
Stop adding sentences when the reader already knows the size, the materials and one true thing about the surface. Stop when you are compensating for unresolved work with louder adjectives. Stop when the wall designer’s word count is met and a proof still fits the panel. Captions are living files only in the sense that facts update when the work is reframed, sold or conserved; they are not a weekly literary project.
Ask for help when your shop shows three incompatible sizes for the same painting. Ask when every caption sounds like a statement paragraph. Ask when a gallery or museum educator offers a rewrite and you need a second pair of eyes to check that their elegance did not alter the medium. Ask when access needs block you from producing text that already exists as clear speech in the studio; record yourself describing the work to a friend, then hire an editor to shape the transcript into a caption.
Hire an editor to enforce length, consistency and looking order. Do not hire them to supply a fashionable theme for a painting that does not support it. Keep approval of facts yourself. Once the master tombstone is stable, reuse it everywhere, link your career-level prose through the statement article, and leave biography to the bio guide. The success test for this page’s skill is small and strict. A stranger reads your words beside your image and can state what the object is, how big it is, what it is made of, and one accurate detail they can verify with their eyes.
FAQ
Search results for “how to describe a painting” mix school formal-analysis worksheets, marketplace SEO blogs and museum label manuals. Formal analysis teaches students to write essays about composition; useful in a classroom, oversized for a wall card. SEO blogs push keyword stuffing; useful only after the tombstone is correct. Museum PDFs teach standing-reader brevity that many artist sites ignore. The answers below follow museum label practice (V&A, Getty, Smithsonian, Art Institute of Chicago), CAA dimension conventions and practical sales-description habits from major artist marketplaces. They stay inside single-work description. Practice-wide statements and biographies are fenced to their own guides.
How do I describe a painting in one short paragraph?
Lead with title, year, medium and size. Add two or three sentences on visible facts and, if needed, one process note the photo hides. Keep the whole chat near 50 to 100 words for walls and short web cards. Save career context for your statement.
What is the correct order for listing dimensions?
List height × width for flat work, and height × width × depth for objects with meaningful depth, per CAA documentation conventions. Keep one unit system inside the string. For international readers, add the other system in parentheses. Measure the work, not the frame, unless the frame is part of the piece.
Should I write in the first person or the third person?
Match the context. Wall labels and institutional copy often use third person. Personal websites and marketplace listings often use first person. Submission forms state the requirement. Do not switch person inside one caption.
How is a work description different from an artist statement?
A work description identifies and orients one object. An artist statement explains the practice across works: what you make, how and why. Museum chats stay short and looking-led; statements run longer and speak to a body of work. See how to write an artist statement for the career-level text.
What should I do instead of writing “mixed media”?
Name materials in descending order of prominence, as museum tombstones do: for example, “acrylic, charcoal and collage on panel.” If a dropdown forces “mixed media,” repeat the specific string in the first line of the description.
How long should an online artwork description be?
Enough to clear size, materials, framed status and one honest looking paragraph: often roughly 100 to 250 words plus bullets. Longer essays belong on a journal page or in a catalogue, not above the buy button. Lead with facts a shipper and a collector both need.
Do I include price in the description?
Follow the venue. Open studios and studio sales often put price on the card. Many websites use a separate price field. Museum walls omit price. Never bury price inside poetic copy if you intend to sell from the room; put it where the eye finds it after the tombstone.
Can I use the same text for Instagram and for a gallery wall?
Reuse the tombstone everywhere. Shorten the chat for the wall to institutional length and tone. Social posts can add a personal aside; walls should not carry soft calls to action or hashtag stacks. Keep one master file and cut downward for standing readers.
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